Wednesday, 2 March 2011

Sandra - The dreaded comma splice!!

Fred walked impatiently along the street. It had started to rain, he turned up his collar and pulled down his cap. May was late, he wondered whether she would turn up at all.  He was just at the point of turning back for home, when he heard his name being called and the click-clack of May's heels on the pavement. Fred turned  to meet her and noticed that she was crying.
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  1. moderator2 March 2011 at 10:39

    I am not very confident that I have got this right. Sorry Gary. I did do the exercises - twice. But hey-ho I do bake exceedingly good cakes. :o)

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  2. Gary3 March 2011 at 06:52

    Bring one along!
    Did you look at the link I sent you?
    The second and third sentences contain comma splices but the others don't. Don't worry though - keep practising and you'll get it. I'll go through it with you again.

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