Fred picked up the proof copy of the book and passed it to May who shook her head angrily.
"The nerve of the woman! How dare she even think of using my name in the title. Just because she fashioned me out of her imagination, that does not give her the right to use my name just as she pleases."
"At least you get a mention Gran. That is more than any of us do." Sarah replied.
Mr Newson looked at Fred questioningly, "I thought you told me the title was going to be 'Apple of Her Eye'.
"I think it was -till that tutor of hers suggested otherwise. She is very easily led you know especially by intelligent,attractive men."
May huffed. "Pity he didn't leave well alone if you ask me. Gave her some idea she could write and now look at her! The house looks a tip and she spends all day hammering away at that laptop - and to what purpose. Is anyone actually going to read it?"
Fred shook his head, " Don't be too hard on her May. She looks happier, don't you think?"
Mr Newson agreed "Yes there's something quite diffferent about her demeanour. It's almost like she has found a purpose again."
"Got ideas above her station if you ask me. She should remember there would be no book if it was not for us."
"What would you call the book Gran" Sarah asked.
"Well, something that would include everyone and not single anyone out."
"How about you Mr Newson".
"Oh! I do not know Sarah. I believe the title should reflect the meaning behind the book. Conscience plays a big part in the story, and what pushes people to behave in a certain way and whether they actually have a choice in the matter."
"Got it then. 'Choices, Conscience and Consequences'." Sarah exclaimed.
"Too much of a tongue twister Sarah what about 'Behind the Curtains?' Fred asked.
"After all that is where we all are. That is where the story is played out."
"Yes, I like that" May replied. "Behind the Curtains." .
Enjoyed reading this Sandra. Great sense of humour. You'll be in Gary's good books too. From the first I have believed in these people and look forward to the development of the story. I like the title too. Perhaps you could get an adjective in front of Curtains. Peter.
ReplyDelete"Just because she fashioned me out of her imagination, that does not give her the right to use my name just as she pleases."
ReplyDeleteAny author who can even consider using these words is well on the way to creating a deeply-felt piece of writing, so well done! And I'm glad to hear you are neglecting the housework. (I havent been described as attractive since about 1980, so thank you very much.) Actually I do like Apple of Her Eye - I think it's a strong title. Rise and Demise just 'pips' it. There's a short story called The Life of Ma Parker by Katherine Mansfield that I recommend - I'll bring it in.
Very funny, Sandra, the characters are really developing. You could combine the two ideas in some way such as 'A Conscience Behind the Curtains' (or 'Beyond the Curtains' instead of 'Behind', perhaps.) Keep brainstorming, something will leap out, I'm sure.
ReplyDeleteI really laughed when I read the comment from May about tapping away on the computer and the house being a mess. We can all identify with that one I'm sure Very perceptive of your character to notice Sandra:-)
ReplyDeleteI agree with Julie here. I think Beyond the Curtains is more mysterious and draws one in. I would pick up a book with that title.