Monday, 18 October 2010

Peter's synopsis-Week 3


The year is l94l .  Deep in the wilds of Rutland stands the decaying grey-stone Georgian mansion of Bolmwood .   Wheelchair-bound Regina Beresford Batson lives a reclusive life there with her only daughter Thelma and the recalcitrant labourer Rickson .  Regina is an imperious, dominating matron who believes she is last in the line of the distinguished Beresford Batsons .   Her daughter Thelma is tall, dark and thin .  A pathetic creature, entirely at the beck and call of her mother .  Rickson a thickset, burly energetic man of fifty-five is Regina’s lover and responsible for the accident that led to her being confined to a wheelchair. .  Thelma is his daughter by another woman.

Juliette is Regina’s long lost niece .   Her father had long been estranged from his sister Regina .   She and her seven-year-old son Gabriel survived the bombing in London that wiped out the rest of the family .   One dark gloomy day they arrive at the door of Bolmwood, evacuees from the Blitz.

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Regina and Rickson are shocked by their arrival .   Rickson has ambitions for Thelma to inherit the estate .  Steps are taken to undermine Juliette and Gabriel and drive them away .   Housed in the coldest , draughtiest parts of the house, Gabriel falls sick .   Juliette spiritedly  demands and gets better quarters .   The incumbents  invent a new strategy: a ghost to frighten the young nervous Gabriel .  Rickson get involved in ghostly tactics exploiting lonely corridors .   Thelma is induced to lead Gabriel whom she has befriended into danger on the parkland lake .  He is saved by the intervention of Jason, a young farmer.

When a struggling damaged Luftwaffe plane crashes into a wing of the house, nobody is killed but in clearing up the debris Juliette comes upon a love letter from Rickson to Regina that reveals Thelma is not her daughter .  Regina recognizes Juliette’s knowledge after a slip of the tongue by young Gabriel .  Rickson in a last throw of the dice plans a campaign to poison her and her son after imprisoning them in a cellar of the house .   By mischance, the feeble-minded Thelma eats poisoned food .   Jason comes to the rescue of the captives.

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Throughout there is a power struggle between the tyrant Regina and her courageous niece as events unfold .  Regina’s weakness is her passionate and enduring love for Rickson for whom she shows uncharacteristic affection which he exploits ruthlessly .  His overriding concern is for his daughter Thelma, who was the love-child of a partner who died tragically and he can never forget .  Juliette too, falls in love with the young energetic Jason who crosses swords with Rickson in his attempts to contact the imprisoned Juliette and Gabrielle after the air crash .  Gabriel is a sensitive boy who builds up a friendship with Thelma, who treacherously destroys that trust under the overwhelming instigations of Regina, and tries to frighten and injure the child.

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4 comments:

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  2. (Sorry, my post above was intended for Hilary's piece so I transferred it.)
    This is a highly enjoyable synopsis with a great deal of potential! I can see it as a Gothic comic novel along the lines of Gormenghast, or perhaps with shade of Sir Henry at Rawlinson End.
    I'd love to see where you go with this. They seem to be a series of grotesques, - one way you will be able to distinguish them from one another will be by attending closely to dialogue.

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  3. This had very dark undertones. I felt a little confused initially about the parentage of Thelma but then got very drawn in by the way the plot wove in and out.
    You are very brave to have three such treacherous inhabitants of this house. I feel very sorry for poor Juliette and her son Gabriel.

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  4. Deep in the wilds of..Rutland?
    I really like your writing, imagination and humour but get a sense that you have no idea where you are taking us - sustained comedy or depth - or just a delight in the world you are creating?
    Maybe too many characters introduced all at once.
    If you are a budding Mervin Peake - I'm buying!

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