Sunday, 31 July 2011

New Start for my Novel - Julie

Any feedback on this gratefully received!

CHAPTER ONE

June 1956

‘You will come to my funeral, won’t you?’

Rupert Fletcher locked the driver’s door of his Armstrong Siddeley Sapphire limousine and addressed himself to the stable boy.  David Mitchell looked up from grooming the chestnut mare, somewhat taken aback by the question.  Without waiting for an answer, Rupert strode off though the courtyard towards the family home, Hayton Hall.  David studied Rupert’s retreating figure thoughtfully and wondered what his employer had meant.

Mary Fletcher was sitting in the drawing room relaxing after her canter, sipping her afternoon gin and tonic.  She heard her husband come in through the side door into the hallway and the unmistakable creak of the fifth step as he climbed the stairs.  She could hear him moving around in his bedroom which was directly overhead.  She reached across to the coffee table and picked up her packet of Embassy cigarettes.  She lit one and inhaled deeply, waiting for him to come down and greet her. There was a squeak, which she guessed was the wardrobe door, followed by indeterminate rattling, a click, then the sound of him getting in, or on, his bed.  There followed a short period of silence, during which Mary wondered whether Rupert had fallen asleep - he had just driven all the way from London, after all.  Then she heard what she would later describe as a soft boom.  She knew at the time that it was Rupert’s four-ten shotgun.  The sound made the hairs on her neck stand on end, and her stomach flipped.  Stubbing out her cigarette in the ashtray, she set off towards Rupert’s bedroom.

Rupert was lying on his back on the double bed which they had never shared.  From the doorway, where Mary stood, he looked as though he could have been asleep, but as she walked closer, she could see that his eyes were wide open, pointing unseeing at the ceiling.  She skirted around the foot of the bed to the other side and gasped.  Blood was pouring from Rupert’s mouth and ear.  The shotgun lay by his side, the end of the barrel inches away from his throat, the stock held loosely in his lifeless hand.

Waves of nausea flooded through her and she returned to the other side of the bed where there was wooden chair, which she pulled up and sat on heavily.  The bed was high and, from a sitting position, she could see only Rupert’s left-hand side, still complete and unmarked.  Mary contemplated his profile, taking in the fine, straight nose, the slightly too-thin lips and the greying hair, which had been such a vivid orange, the first time they had met, twenty years earlier.

She had been sitting in the churchyard, reading, when the awkward young man came and stood in front of her.  He lifted his trilby politely, revealing a shock of orange hair, and offered her his hand.  ‘Rupert Fletcher,’ he stammered, blushing furiously.

Mary briefly took his limp, clammy hand in her own and smiled, ‘Mary Simmons, pleased to meet you.’

‘Do you mind?’ Rupert enquired, indicating the space beside Mary on the bench.

‘No, of course not.’  He sat down and Mary waited uncertainly.

‘How do you like the village?’ Rupert began.

‘It’s fine.  I just wanted to get away from Yorkshire for a while, so my Aunt and Uncle invited me to stay.’

‘Yes, yes I know.  I saw you with Mrs Simmons last week in Church.’

Mary wondered what else this awkward young man had heard about her.

‘Where do you live?’ she asked.

Rupert cleared his throat in an embarrassed sort of way and stammered, ‘At the Hall.’

Of course he did.  The Fletchers owned virtually everything in Hayton: the cottage her Aunt lived in, all the houses around the green, the green itself, even the pub.

‘Oh,’ seemed to be the only answer she could think of and, although it appeared unsuitable, Mary gave it anyway for want of something better to say.

There was a pause which threatened to become as long as the whole conversation so far, when Rupert cleared his throat again and blurted out, ‘Would you like to come for dinner this evening?’

If Mary had been standing up, she would have fallen over.  She gripped the arm of the bench and looked straight ahead, wondering whether she had heard him correctly. 

‘I, err,’ he paused, then continued in a rush, ‘I would like to welcome you properly to Hayton and perhaps get to know you better.’

Mary raised her eyebrows – she’d heard that one before, but when she turned to look at him, Rupert’s face was so open and so earnest, and he was blushing so brightly, that she believed he did, truly, just want to get to know her.  She nodded her acquiescence and Rupert leapt to his feet with relief.  His freckly face was beaming and he raised his hat again.  ‘That’s settled then.  Dinner is served at eight.’

***

The grandfather clock downstairs in the hallway chimed.  Mary’s faraway gaze returned to Rupert’s lifeless profile, then she stood up slowly and approached the bed.  With a shaking hand she reached over and closed his eyes with her thumb and forefinger, being careful not to touch the blood which was starting to congeal on the right side of Rupert’s head.  The red stain had spread across the counterpane almost to the farthest edge of the bed.  She planted a kiss on his faintly lined forehead and wiped away a stray tear which fell onto his once-freckly cheek.

‘Poor Rupert,’ she whispered.  ‘I’m so very sorry.’

***

Masterclass for Novelists

Thanks for this, Hilary.  There is no mention of an evening course in the subject in the printed course guide, but according to the website, there is a Masterclass for Novelists on Tuesday evenings, 7 - 9, run by Lynne Bryan.  See if this link works: https://enrol.norfolk.gov.uk/CourseDetailsView.asp?ID1=1111&ID2=47489&ID3=1 

Julie

Saturday, 30 July 2011

hilary hanbury is fundraising for The British Red Cross Society

hilary hanbury is fundraising for The British Red Cross Society - by joining the ladies driving challenge on August 20th. i will be driving everything from a JCB to a fire engine and everything in between, so if you would like to help a rather maniacal grandmother to achieve some cash for a really good cause and you would like to donate, please see webpage www.justgiving.com/hilary-hanbury

answers to some questions - Hilary

Hi Thursday Five,
I have found out some answers to the questions we discussed at our meeting last week.
It was really lovely to catch up with you all again by the way - even if we couldn't have a drink to celebrate!


Question 1 - Who is delivering the 'Writing a Novel' course on Thursday evenings in September?
A. Mr Gary Dexter:-)


Question 2 - Who is running the Masterclass for Novelists daytime on Fridays ?
A. Lyn Bryant


Question 3 - Is there a possibility of running an evening course in Masterclass for Novelists?
A. Yes, there may be, but we would all need to write an email to the subject manager ( Andy McDonnell, the guy who came into our Thursday workshop session to tell us about what is on offer next year) He has suggested that Lyn may be up for doing an evening session if there is a core group who will definitely join.


Room Space for future meetings.
I spoke to Gini, my daughter, who works at Norwich Arts Centre. She did say that if we wanted to meet there, there is the upstairs space which we could use, which is like a mezzanine floor to the bar. 
Providing we bought a drink there, it wouldn't be a problem to use the space. Parking is available at the shopping area ( TK Maxx and Toys'r'Us) which would be free. It is a very short walk then to the Arts Centre.
I haven't had an opportunity to talk to Linda Bammant ( premises manager at Wensum Lodge) or the Bicycle Shop which I will visit on Wednesday, so will post again to the blog when I have the answers to the other questions.


I hope you are all writing furiously so that we have something to discuss when we do next meet on 18th August, wherever it may be. Just to remind us all, we were all going to have worked out our plot as far as we possibly can, for discussion and comment, and were going to post parts of a chapter to the blog for comments and discussion at the next meeting. 
We were also going to see if we could hunt out a decent book on grammatical construction and bring it if we find one.


Looking forward to seeing you all then. ( I suppose we could at least get a drink if we were at the Arts Cente, we would have to bring our own if we are at Wensum Lodge!


Best wishes all, and keep writing:-)   Hilary

Thursday, 28 July 2011

JURNET'S

Hope to see as many of you as poss tonight.  I, too, have been quite productive and look forward to agreeing our strategy for the weeks ahead.

Julie

Wednesday, 27 July 2011

Books for Thursday meeting

I am looking forwardd to seeing you all tomorrow.  I have two books I will bring along with me for you to look at.  Margaret

Tuesday, 26 July 2011

Writing Session Jurnet's Bar

Looking forward to seeing the Thursday Novelists Five at  Jurnet's  at  7 pm.  on Thursday 28th.  I've been writing regularly and looking  forward to seeing you all  and thrashing out  a fruitful plan  that will carry all our novels  forward.    PETER.

Wednesday, 6 July 2011

Julie - Writers' Group

Looking forward to the course next Thursday, and also to meeting you all again at the end of the month.  I wondered whether it might be worth considering buying or borrowing a book aimed at writers groups which might have exercises and and suggestions for us to work through, or do you think we can come up with enough ideas ourselves?  Perhaps someone has a book they could bring along which might be useful.

Tuesday, 5 July 2011

PETER - masterclass for novelists.

Dear Thursday  Novelists  Co-op,

I've signed up for the Masterclass on Thursday l4th looking forward to seeing other folks from our group

I'll be at the meeting too on the 28th when  we can sort out our self-help writing programmes.  Still writing,  of course,  desperately trying to complete my family stories so that I can make  a  start  on putting  together  the mosaic pieces  of  'The Battle for Howlett's  Island.'.

All  Good  Wishes,  I'll  keep in  touch.   May the muse be with us all in our  efforts.  PETER 


  

Monday, 4 July 2011

Re discussion on publishing - last Thursday

Hi,
 If you want to know more about the new initiative I mentioned about an alternative way of getting published go to The Independent Saturday 2nd July and read the Howard Jacobson article. It's about pitching an idea online and readers pledging money.
See some of you on 14th and the rest on 28th July:-)

Hilary

Hello Thursday Novelists!

Caroline, Julie, Margaret, Peter, Tony, Sandra, and anyone else who still accesses this blog - 


So are you all still writing ? I hope so, as we will be holding our first meeting as the Thursday Novelists on Thursday 28th July from 7 - 8.30 in Jurnet's Bar. At this meeting we can decide between us, how we would like the group to run. i.e. how often would you like to meet. Monthly? fortnightly?bi- monthly? and maybe get a plan together of how you all think the weeks should pan out. It would be great if occasionally, Gary could turn up as a honorary Thursday Novelist, to keep us on the straight and narrow, but at least we can get it off the ground on 28th


 - We have the makings of a good and supportive group, so I hiope I'm not talking to myself here and that you will all turn up on 28th.


Best wishes, and keep writing


Hilary