Great! Thanks for this Margaret. Just thinking...if she's still in the train can she really 'look around'? might it be better to wait till she's in the station? Gotta be careful with the opening sentence! But a confident beginning.
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Great! Thanks for this Margaret. Just thinking...if she's still in the train can she really 'look around'? might it be better to wait till she's in the station? Gotta be careful with the opening sentence! But a confident beginning.
ReplyDeleteIt could be set in the past, present or future. I quite like that because you can go anywhere with it.
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