Scene 1 - day 1
Said goodbye to Kesa, met Shadow. Hate him. He smells and hit me. Packed my satchel ready. Please let me come back to Kesa. I miss ma & pa already.
Scene 2 - day 48
Disaster! Shadow dead! Lost! Am so hungry. Sheltering in house of Jee-sos. Kesa why did I leave you? An animal is moving outside the door. They're coming.
Scene 3 - day 168
2 days from village. Wanted to walk on, too dangerous. Slavers everywhere. Must be gone before 1st light. Have to warn Elders. Kesa I'm coming! O love! Gruff is growling.
Very tantalizing. I see you've killed off the Manning Master (if I read it right). Killing off a hated character...might that be a little too easy, when coming to terms with him might be harder for Ty and more interesting? Just a thought.
ReplyDeleteKesa is Japanese for 'this morning' in case you're interested/didn't know.
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