1. Pamela
Warm blue eyes, abundant brown hair – she held my hand, her face gentle and enquiring. The birds were calling out along the sunlit road.
2. A city encounter
A bald man, wearing misted glasses and wiping his sweaty pate, asked me the way to the bank. He was heavily in debt, he said.
3. A bridegroom’s reflections
The best man’s speech fell flat. Sipping my wine, I trembled – what with pre-honeymoon nerves, and an excruciating pair of hired trousers.
These don't remind me so much of tweets as some other literary form, though I cant quite put my finger on what. That's not to say they aren't very good.
ReplyDeleteThey are almost poetic Tony. I like the style. Much nicer than a tweet even if that was the homework!
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