Sunday, 3 October 2010

Peter: First Sentence.

Tom  sat  on  the  top  of  the  iceberg,  his  legs  dangling  down,  Nechoska  the  polar  bear  was  lying  at  his  side.
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5 comments:

  1. Gary3 October 2010 at 03:27

    Very nice! I need to talk to you and Sandra about something called the 'comma splice' though. Look it up if you have time. Also, do you have a novel synopsis or precis of plot/characters for us?

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  2. moderator3 October 2010 at 15:25

    I want to read more -so that has to be good. I like the picture it envokes in my mind.

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  3. moderator3 October 2010 at 15:29

    We will need to work together on that comma splice! :-)

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  4. moderator5 October 2010 at 02:11

    It made me think of The Life of Pi- I am looking forward to reading further.

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  5. moderator5 October 2010 at 11:04

    Really liked this, agree re Life of Pi comment. Would like to know what story you have in mind.

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